Peer review Erin’s draft

Well it definitely seemed as you had a interesting evening.
It was great that they actually allowed you to do that. I think the detail was great, alot to take in, in just a few short hours. Good job looking into the details of Officer Gouveia’s “worst night.” That must be hard on anyone to have to pull a gun and take a mans life. Unfortunately it’s part of the job, but thankfully it is not a nightly occurrence (well hopefully not).
It was very much structured and organized in the order of the night. If anything, I may have tried to get into more detail of the scenes from the calls. But you have so much detail on the night and your conversations, I understand why you do not.
It’s nice to see there are still some good guys out there. Not having to file paperwork and doing it anyway just as a precaution for the patient, shows the kind of man he is. Better to be safe than sorry.
I guess police and fire are on the same color structure. My husband is a fireman and they have the same round about way of the traffic lights for their calls.

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